Learning is crucial to achieve one's objectives in life. however, it can be accomplished by different ways. Some students prefer to work individually on assignments. Others prefer to work in groups. In my vantage point, I am more inclined with the latter option for different reasons that I am going to address in my essay.
First, students working in groups can save time. There are different assignments to do in one task and that include the searching part, the auditing part, and the writing part. All are done to achieve excellence at the end of the project.. If the teacher asked for an assignments on disease management, then the student need to do all the work my himself or herself. however, if the work is shared by the group, then, it would be much easier to assign a task for each member in the group. For instance, a student can search for the signs and symptoms of the disease, while others would search for the treatment options. There is no doubt that One student cannot do the all the work alone. Thus, working in a group does not only make the work more efficient but also it can shorten the time to accomplish the project.
Secondly, students working in a group can make new friends. A lot of people join universities and do not know much people during the first semester of enrollment. Students search for opportunities to be introduced to other students and share with them their happy moments. Unfortunately, working individually does not provide chances for student to meet others. For example, when I was enrolled in my university five years ago, I did not have much friends, it was only by group work that I was able to make a network of friends. Later on, we started to hang out together and enjoy our time, which was a blessing for everybody. Therefore, having the opportunities to work in a group did not only help me to study well, but also to have a larger network of friends.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first to cross my mind, they are by no means the only reasons available. There is another subtle point, which the noteworthy, intelligently, results of a study which was published in the American school academy journal. The results of then study concluded that students working in groups are 3 points more confident to communicate with others, on a scale from one to ten. The study was performed on 120 students from different schools to prevent bias.
To wrap up, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that a person cannot live or work by himself or herself. It is only through group work that allows students to work more effectively, save time and make new friend.
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- TPO 24 Integrated TOEFL Writing 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
Learning is crucial to achieve ones objectives in life. however, it can be ...
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Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ial to achieve ones objectives in life. however, it can be accomplished by different wa...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...eve excellence at the end of the project.. If the teacher asked for an assignments...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an assignment' or simply 'assignments'?
Suggestion: an assignment; assignments
... the project.. If the teacher asked for an assignments on disease management, then the student...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... do all the work my himself or herself. however, if the work is shared by the group, th...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...eople join universities and do not know much people during the first semester of enr...
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Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...iversity five years ago, I did not have much friends, it was only by group work that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2194.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73866090713 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71722058279 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4686825054 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3055124835 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3846153846 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8076923077 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396120175501 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12542216478 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109650982478 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221455597763 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588096745625 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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