Today, the world is changing rapidly, and a person needs to cop with change. Having this in mind, some individuals believe that it is better to be specialized in one subject than being familiar in different topic. On the other hand, others argue that being familiar with variety of subjects may help them more. In my opinion, being familiar with multiple topic create better job opportunities, improve understanding of ones job, and makes the person choose other careers in their lives.
First and foremost, having knowledge in different topic creates an opportunities to get jobs. Today, companies are looking for individuals who study more than one major. For instance, a pharmacist or who has another major in business administration can be competitive to get a job in a pharmaceutical company than a a person who is only familiar with drugs. Similarly, a teacher who has has a major in a psychology and teaches math has an edge over a teacher who has knowledge only in math because a teacher with psychology background is more able to deal with difficult students. Thus, companies would rather give the job to a person who has a broader knowledge.
Second, being familiar with different topic enables a person to thrive in his career. he broader the knowledge of a person, the more he or she can solve problems. For instance, a cardiologist with neurology background can treat patients suffering from heart problems and complain of pain in their limbs. At the end this doctor is better able to diagnose his patient and give the proper treatment. At the same time, a tennis player who has a background in psychology, can understand the behavior of his opponent and win the game. Therefore, having knowledge in different fields makes a person capable of dealing with difficult situations and be successful.
Finally, learning different topics enables a person to change his major if he is not satisfied with it. Many people learn a major not because they like it, but because their parents asked to do it. Thus, at some point in life , if they decide to change their occupation they can do so easily. For example, an engineer who does not like construction, and felt more a passion towards medicine,and or she have medical background can easily study medicine and be a doctor. Therefore, having knowledge in different fields can create opportunities for people to be what they really want to be.
In conclusion, people are always learning as long as they are alive. Therefore, having a broader knowledge offers more jobs, and enable a person to thrive in his career. Moreover, if a person is not satisfied with what he is doing, there is always a possibility to seek other opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, similarly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93201754386 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84198664434 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460526315789 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 707.4 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0021265975 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7826086957 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8260869565 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30434782609 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994280043853 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347220050189 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402789266463 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610934941629 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306436272505 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.