Dear Mrs. Sheela,
I am a new resident to this colony who has bought an individual house that has been located behind your house. I am writing this letter to invite you to attend the party that I have organized at my new home to celebrate this.
To be more specific, I have very recently bought the individual villa having door number 17/A by overcoming several legal and financial hurdles. Moreover, this is my first own house. Hence my family is planning to throw a grand celebration to our friends, relatives, and close neighbors. We would be glad if you could attend the function and grace the event.
Preparations for the function is going at full swing. For examples, we have already done with arrangements for music band who are expert in playing different styles of music starting from Karnatic, western and to country style. Furthermore, as the event will be attended by people from multiple backgrounds we plan to serve a plethora of cuisines for dinner like Indian, Mexican, Italian and Chinese while having separate lines for Vegetarian and Non-Vegetarian dishes. I was wondering if you suggest us some reputed restaurants who will undertake party orders to serve quality and delicious dishes.
It is certain that the noise of celebration will affect your sleep, however, I hope you will understand our excitement and accept our apologies.
We are looking forward to seeing you at the event.
Thanking you
Yours sincerely,
Akilan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at has been located behind your house. I am writing this letter to invite you to ...
^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
.... Moreover, this is my first own house. Hence my family is planning to throw a grand ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06611570248 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70058315462 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640495867769 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9447725906 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3076923077 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215013308395 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690769410895 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679574282876 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997052329309 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050041090208 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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