People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
The speaker claims that people should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences. While I find this claim paradoxical on its face; the paradox is explainable and explanation is well supported empirically. Nevertheless, the claim is unfair generalization in that it falls to account for other empirical evidence serving to discredit it.
Business management and operation is fully dependent on risk evaluation and make profitable decision in it. Such as, business management team plays a vital role in to invite the investors and to serve the client. in addition to this if team does not take risk to handle the client and investor there will be no work for company. likewise , investors and client of the company are taking risk of service and investment for it without knowing the circumstances, Thus taking risk and finding best solution for the complex problem leads to success.
Thomas Edison, the great scientist of history who invented electric bulb , eventually Thomas took more than ten thousand number of experimaent to find which material or metal would spark for it. Though, he took risk of inventing bulb but Thomas did not know the consequence of that ten thousand experiment. he could have died in chemical metal composition . similarly people wont be able to see artificial light. thus , taking risk involves the success and failures. eventually, people learn from that risk of failure.
Neil Armstrong , the first Astronomer who landed on the moon. although, scientist and researchers are very well aware of that nasa failed many times , in cost of many lives just before the Apollo 11 mission the team made it to moon. Similarly research work should not be stopped or get banned on any ongoing experiment on the basis of without knowing the results. Therefore, people should take risk in optimum way, and achieve the great success for the nation and world.
In conclusion, known risk could lead to nowhere. Because person will hesitate to take risk for success or failure. People of the world wont discover the great novel things for betterment of humanism with known results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, likewise, nevertheless, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12356321839 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69804772405 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580459770115 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0281830395 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.15 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198993491938 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678499146804 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187131356359 0.0758088955206 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120068567148 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162529144286 0.0667264976115 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.