Essay topics:
Many young people regularly change their jobs over the year. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In contemporary era, youngsters are frequently swap their employment from one to another in a span of year. There are numerous causes behind this phenomenon, however, i believe that the drawbacks are more than the benefits. Both the reasons and my opinion will explain further.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'swapped'.
Suggestion: swapped
...emporary era, youngsters are frequently swap their employment from one to another in...
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Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...causes behind this phenomenon, however, i believe that the drawbacks are more tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 41.998997996 14% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 233.0 1615.20841683 14% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 45.0 315.596192385 14% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17777777778 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.59002006411 4.20363070211 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82283457924 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 40.0 176.041082164 23% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.888888888889 0.561755894193 158% => OK
syllable_count: 73.8 506.74238477 15% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5358352374 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.6666666667 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0986825445086 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545131077724 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0159441755845 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986825445086 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 78.4519038076 18% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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