In recent years, change jobs of youngsters has become a broad issue to the general public. Some people conceive that the trend is many benefits. However, others believe that its is could also some drawbacks. In my view, its cons never overshadow its pros. Discussed bellow are several reasons of this issue, and outline advantages as well as disadvantages of this trend.
First and foremost, people should recognize this issue that there are several causes of this trend. A very important point to consider is that youngsters often change jobs because benefits of working environment. This means that they like find new jobs that have more challenging and competitive. Furthermore, another point I would like to mention is that more and more wage salary jobs have searched by young employees because they must pay the higher prices of housing, transport and other products in urban areas. Moreover, some young people feel boring with current jobs due to conflicts with boss and colleagues, working environment, therefore these causes lead to change jobs.
On the upside, in fact, there are many benefits of this issue. First of all, when talking on a new job, young people may be more motivated by new skills, new friend and new working environment therefore they make perform better on new job. In addition, the new job always contains new tasks and new skills that require youngsters improve and learn more known ledges. Last but not least, people raise creative, confidence and many soft skills when they have worked various jobs.
On the other hand, in addition to advantages of this issue, it has some negative effects. People has this opinion because following reasons. Firstly, as for a corporation, it is the tremendous damage when employees quit jobs because the cost of training and recruitment are very expensive. Secondly, it makes youngsters spend a long time to be familiar with new job. Finally, not all young people not successful in this issue.
To sum up, the above-mentioned facts have created a dilemma when people evaluate the impacts of this issue, and it is still a controversial issue. As far as, I concerned, I put more highlight the advantages of this trend. People should have further consideration on this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ngsters has become a broad issue to the general public. Some people conceive that the trend is...
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Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...efits. However, others believe that its is could also some drawbacks. In my view, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, as for, in addition, in fact, as well as, first of all, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05107526882 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63094324417 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518817204301 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5086269181 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4090909091 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77272727273 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276893228858 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894734144686 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495473145783 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162067263445 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355591333721 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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