Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the world, particularly in their contribution to global warming.
Why is global warming is problem?
What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?
Today, the activity of wealthy countries have led to variety of the problems related to the environment, and as a result of them, global warming is worsening day by day. Regarding the issue, there are several causes , and possible solutions which will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, one of the primary reasons is related to the rapid industrialisation in developed countries. It is obvious that one of the major incomes of these countries is the result of a multitude of industrial sites. Thereby, Ozone layers is negatively affected by the harmful emissions of these sites, and it undergoes depletion. This layer has a great role to weaken the ultraviolet rays emitted by Sun, and as it depletes, the temperature in the Earth becomes high.
To address this problem, one of the possible solutions is to create such equipment that can reduce the amount of greenhouse gases extracted by industrial sites. This can be done by placing this device into pipes of the buildings. Regarding the second way, fossil fuel, which is mostly used in industry, can be replaced with environmentally friendly resources. By applying these solutions on the problem, Ozone layer will start to receive less harmful gases, and reform itself.
To conclude, as a result of catastrophic effects of industrial sites in developed countries, one of the layers of atmosphere, called Ozone , cannot reduce the solar rays, which increase the temperature level in the Earth. Hence, in order to solve this problem, new technology can be applied in industry, or energy resources, which have negative impact on environment, can be substituted with less harmful ones
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, regarding, second, so, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13382899628 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88863197027 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542750929368 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0402575194 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.083333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208394541583 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695856737781 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699115975541 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129910132776 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682296115948 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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