The practice of illegally hunting wild animals continues to cause concern in many countries, particularly developing countries. What are the causes of such hunting? What are the effects on the animals and on the wider human society in these countries and beyond?
Poaching of wildlife is increasingly becoming a worrisome practice especially in less developed countries. This essay will discuss two major causes of this unethical act and the consequences on animals and the society in general.
To begin, the high demand for certain animal parts to treat diseases is a major cause of these unnecessary killing of untamed animals. Despite the advancements in orthodox medicine, many people still believe in the efficacy of using animals to cure certain diseases. For example, thousands of ivory tusks from illegally slain elephants are smuggled to China for preparation of traditional medicine. Another reason for this menace is poverty. Many inhabitants of areas with large animal population are usually poor and see these animals as fair game that can be eaten Despite government regulations banning hunting, unfortunately people still secretly engage. A good illustration is in the Kenyan Serengeti plains,where tribesmen have been apprehended, while setting traps for lions and buffaloes they would consume.
The major impact of slaying animals is threat of extinction. In times past , many wild animals had a healthy population, but these days are on the brink of being wiped off, thereby distorting the natural food chain. For example, the activities of poachers in Rwanda has depleted the number of rhinoceros in that country. With regards to humans, the impact of using animals for medical treatment often results in fatality because there is no scientific proof that they are effective. A notable Japanese singer, was said to have opted for tortoise-shell therapy to cure breast cancer, which it proved ineffective resulting in her death afterwards.
In conclusion, unlawful hunting of wild animals is very harmful to humans and the animals alike. Government should look into this issue and create policies and punishment to discourage this act.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44745762712 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84116399348 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650847457627 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9923802612 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.133333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224168646465 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694831017024 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691137667425 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136921596247 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345397036027 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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