Experience is more effective and useful than books and formal education. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
One of the most conspicuous trends in today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the education system and in people thought that the experience is far better than books and school education. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in others life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that masses learn more in life through experiences and this learning cannot only contribute to civilian life but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to a wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only one when follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. However, it is apparent why many are in favour of experience rather than formal education.
In the view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefit of experience is indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95634920635 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8346641088 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56746031746 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.054643889 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.545454545 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154427829233 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592292913695 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617232570631 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904036944841 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514026137051 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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