Experience is more effective and useful than books and formal education. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
Nowadays, universities and colleges have no longer be pursued by the young generation as it is believed that experience is much more effective and useful than books and formal education when looking for a job. Personally, I tend to agree with this argument, due to time-saving and practicability.
First of all, knowledge or skills acquired from experience can be used in other practice directly, which is different from academic knowledge. This is because it significantly eliminates the gap between knowledge and practice existing in books due to late updates. For example, graduates majoring in accounting from universities may find it difficult to practice the rules in their course content into reality as accounting standards are constantly changing. By contrast, we would be bothered by this issue if we learn skills from hands-on experience.
Furthermore, it makes sense that studying from experience is more time-saving than from books. This is especially true when we consider the fact that how much pages in the book are outdated. Although skipping the fundamental theory and jumping into practice may hinder further career development, you can always use the time saved by this way to explore other promotion.
In conclusion, there are various arguments to support that experience is more useful and effective, including directly and save time, which I strongly agree with. Therefore, as the tuition fee and cost of books keep increasing, it is suggested that young people should consider learning from experience rather than schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41152263374 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94920215619 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61316872428 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3154232086 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.545454545 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266063780946 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989860486655 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609770231068 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179941703785 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764913612614 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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