You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
ask your friend, to send you one of the photographs
explain why you need that particular photograph
tell your friend what happened to your copy of it
Dear Mike,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing this epistle to request a copy of a photograph as my version has been spoiled. Let me explain in detail.
Finally, I have reached back home safely although the journey was tiresome. While in transit I was going through some of the breathtaking photographs which we took while holidaying in Bali, unfortunately, one of my favourite photographs is spoilt therefore can you send me a copy. Let me remind you the photograph was taken in the Balinese traditional attire by our tour guide in Ullawatu temple when both of us were looking towards the sea. The picture is one of my favourites as it presented the panoramic view of the temple surrounded by the Pacific Ocean, therefore, I need to use it as the timeline picture for my Facebook profile.
The photograph was accidentally washed by the water leakage from a co-passengers water bottle which he had kept aside to my luggage. Additionally my camera lens has also been damaged in this incident.
I hope you can send me a copy of the photograph at the soonest.
Warm wishes
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
^^^
Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e. While in transit I was going through some of the breathtaking photographs which we took ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
... which he had kept aside to my luggage. Additionally my camera lens has also been damaged in...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... photograph at the soonest. Warm wishes Said
^^^
Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...raph at the soonest. Warm wishes Said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, so, therefore, while, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7193877551 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82283981387 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9594093375 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0909090909 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131634550668 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483148601905 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680219087702 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862966920087 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510897968824 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.