Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
On the other point of view, they work. Nowadays, there are professionals in many fields such as sports, business and etc. Some people think that professionals in sports can gain more money than professionals in other fields. Some number of people think that is fair while others not.
Some people believe that professionals in sport must earn more money than professionals in other fields because they don’t live a normal lifestyle. They must to training and spending a lot of time for the developing their sport skills. Moreover, to succeed, they will need to move step by step and do not miss sport activities. For example, football players will need a lot of practice to win the final match.
Additionally, successful players worthy of their earning money because they can bring a lot of benefits in country’s team. Sport professionals can improve country’s position, also will bring success and popularity among other countries.
part-time job and must to only attend at important performances. They work less and earn more money than people who work in significant professions. Totally, I agree with people who think that it is justice for sports professionals to earn more money than other professional.
To conclude, some people argued against if it is justice for sports professionals to get more money than professionals in other considerable fields. Some of them agree that it is fair because sports players have a difficult life while others thought that is unfair because professionals in other fields work harder in many cases. In my point of view, sports players fairly deserve more money than others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: etc.
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Suggestion: Part-time
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, for example, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91892585714 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479245283019 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9670461357 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492038096093 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182900649167 0.084324248473 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153671967634 0.0667982634062 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306652123995 0.151304729494 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118149030338 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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