In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
There are some regions in the United States, which are impressed by a curfew. Owing to this, the teens are not permitted to stay outdoors without the company of grown-ups after a certain hour at night. I feel that there might be several reasons behind this, associated with the security of the young ones, and this makes it an appropriate action.
To commence, I would like to say that curfews are only imposed in the intolerable situations when any deleterious act can take place unalarmingly. Moreover, it would only be imposed on those areas which are potentially more vulnerable to be the victims of some terrorist activities which can lead to serious repercussions. On the top of it, it cannot be denied that children are the soft targets to hunt down with inconsiderable difficulty. In the growing stage, young minds are not adequately sharp to recognize the evil intentions behind the smiling faces of strangers. Hence, they can be easily lured into the entrapments which can harm them in unimaginable ways. However, if they are accompanied with some individuals possessing developed cognitive abilities, then they can be shielded from any devastating mishap and it can be one less thing to worry about for the security forces.
Moving further, this might be a matter to argue for some because they might feel that such a move hinders the freedom of the teenagers and can irate them as a result. What they do not realise is that this is highly necessary for the protection of their neighborhood and their offsprings. Although it means that they have to remain sticked to their younger ones when they are out, but this should not be a problem for them to get irritated as it is their moral responsibility to caress their children. They should understand that the people appointed for their guard cannot be present everywhere and anyways they should not think of leaving their children alone outside because a curfew means hostile conditions are prevailing.
Coming to conclusion, I would like to say that if some areas are curfewed in the United States, its sole purpose is the safety of the residents and more than that, of the youngsters. Thus, it should not be opposed at all and should be seen as an optimistic gesture.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87664041995 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72341047433 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535433070866 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4426049609 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.866666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238098214827 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802283630604 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371679977977 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143644358505 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231014295592 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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