It is often argued that with the advancement of technology,electronic media are acting as translator for different languages.As a consequence a section of society believes that learning foreign language is a wastage. In this essay, i will discuss both the views whether being proficient in foreign language is beneficial and will give my opinion in the end.
It is quite true that computers have played an important role in translating one language to another.It has become very easy to find the suitable words or phrases of another language . For example, Google's free service instantly translates words, phrases and web pages between English and other 100 languages.
However, it is always beneficial to be bilingual. Firstly, the is a huge demand for the job of professional translators.Many bureaucrats and entrepreneurs are accompanied by professional translators or interpreters in their business tours.As a consequence this is advantageous to them for proper understanding of business deals. For instance, the premiers of different nations are escorted by transcribers to understand the speeches delivered by other countrymen.
Secondly, it is commonly seen that in certain countries only the respective official language of the nation is spoken . As a result people are unaware of other languages. Foreigners visiting these countries would be benefited if they are proficient in the official languages of those particular countries. For example, country like Spain,where the native language is Spanish .People aware of Spanish language would find it easy to communicate .
To conclude, undoubtedly, machine translators are an easy way of retrieving data in other languages.But sometimes it is impractical to use them in our daily routine .Thus ,it is always advisable that foreigners should apt learning the native language as this instantly connect the local people with the immigrants
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- People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on an individually and on society? 89
- Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the causes people do this? Do you think this is a good thing or bad thing? 61
- some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.to what extent do you agree with view? 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64981949458 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40178902034 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592057761733 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0764471839 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.416666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161852514485 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569976273631 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479046243594 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096329456568 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434864065641 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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