Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain, others say that films also have educational value. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In the current scenario, the trend of watching movies is surging up.while, it is thought by some people, humans watch movies only as a recreational source and others hold opposing view and opine that movies not only provide us entertainment but also contributes in enhancing our educational knowledge.In my opinion, I see much potential in the latter view because it boost up our academic skills.
One pertinent reason, why humans think that movies are watched by people solely for entertainment purpose is that movies acts as stress buster.As,nowadays, people do work from dawn to desk to accomplish their necessities when they get back home they seek for a resource for amusement at that time individuals prefer to watch movies in order to get rid of tiredness of entire day. As a result, owing to this human beings have considered it as a best resource of entertainment. A recent survey conducted by The times of America which revealed that about 50% people watched movies only for entertainment purpose to remove fatigue of whole day.
Despite the above considerations, the educational aspect of pictures cannot be overlooked. There are different kinds of movies release in the country every year such as, motivational, real life stories, thriller movies. As all these movies have their own essence from which we learn many life lessons . Furthermore that people apply on their life's for making it smooth running. For instance,if movie base on the real hero life bhagat singh which was the legend of Punjab which was instilled with the patriotism by watching these types not only help us in providing knowledge of his life history but also people can learn the patriot for our country.
In addition, youngsters who want to pursue their career in the field of movie making for those these movies play a pivotal role to show them a right path to follow their passion.
In conclusion, although, people are used to watch mofor delight our soul in terms of relaxing our body, yet, it plays a substantial role in learning life skills in terms of watching films of legends and by showing path of the career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96056338028 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76797444943 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588732394366 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.936509279 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.090909091 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2727272727 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13091412763 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485517640004 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364874463426 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672945495575 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410568689919 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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