Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
Statutory deterrents have been considered to be the mean of controlling crime in almost all the countries since time immemorial. Perhaps this would have initiated from the day human beings settled down in communities as social animals. A large number of people and nations do believe law plays a significant role in changing human behaviour. I also stand with them as legal restrictions could act, by and large, in modifying behaviour of citizenry in a country .
All the nations across globe follow rules and regulations for driving a vehicle on road and also have formulated penalties for breaking the rules . In a way , these regulatory actions by law enforces the discipline among people on road and avoids chaos to a greater extent. What would have happened if there were no regulations? Certainly the number of road traffic accidents would have escalated to a higher number beyond our imagination because it is the human tendency to act own mindset. this is an ample example of human nature modification by the law.
Furthermore, many middle-east nations have got very stringent punishments enforced by law in deterring violence and sexual harassments. Statistcs show that the crime rates in these regions are very minimal comparing to rest of the world because of the fear in people to commit a crime induced by the legal penalties . However, laws should not encroach one's human rights.
In a conclusion, I strongly agree that law has the power to modify people's behaviour and it is found to be a necessary for the harmony of lives under sky.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99613899614 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80503757022 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5659886218 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183295006441 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068261942086 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747729378831 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111941281214 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195805304644 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.