Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there is more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages or disadvantages of living in a house compared to living in an apartment.
<p class="MsoNormal">A lot find it more convenient living in an apartment within a complex rather than living in an independent home. I strongly believe that the desirable outcomes from living in a house are much higher than from living in an apartment, and here is why.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal">Although some might find it less costly to live in an apartment, living in a home will also save a lot of money in other ways. You and your children will definitely want to go to a park or to a swimming pool where you can relax and get out some energy. This will ultimately force a family whom live in an apartment to pay memberships for each individual in the family in a club so they can fulfill those needs. Living in an independent home will give you space, instead of paying annual membership fees you can build your own pool. Recently it can actually cost less to build a pool than to pay the club’s annual fees. One can also have a sitting area in his back yard to enjoy a sunny day without the need of going to a park and pay an entrance fees. Although some parks are free to the public still you will either find it noisy or you will not feel comfortable enjoying the day with crowds around you.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal">Another factor that we can acknowledge is the idea of being independent and enjoying some privacy. Despite the fact of having to respect the space between you and the person living next door, but a lot of times you ought to invite over some friends and have some music on, this will be a huge inconvenience to your neighbor and he might as well call in the police for the noise your making. While living in a big home you will not have to face such unwanted situation. You can party all night in your own property without being disturbed by anyone.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal">In conclusion, it highly depends on each ones priorities, whether the pros and cons between living in a house and living in apartment is suitablefor him.<o:p></o:p></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1660, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...s well call in the police for the noise your making. While living in a big home you ...
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Line 1, column 1673, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n the police for the noise your making. While living in a big home you will not have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, so, still, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.21596963936 2.80592935109 150% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531428571429 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.4027440612 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.545454545 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8181818182 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271249305835 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119819083245 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109807806891 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271249305835 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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