There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
The engagement between the sound of different musical instruments together, forms a rhythm that most people enjoy. Lately a lot of music schools has been established, which indicates the importance of music for a lot of fans.
Music has many forms and many categories. There is Jaz, classical, romance, relaxing, metal and a lot more. Only recently, that it increased in number. Frequently it was only revolving around three or 4 types. The importance of music is not only trapped in entertainment, medical research has shown that some medical conditions can be cured through music. Mental diseases and anger problems can be healed through relaxing rhythms.
Although globalization brought different type of music from one country to another, traditional music of each country will always stay the best way to identify it. The culture of each country can be represented through music and it’s unique instruments. For instant, for a lot of countries, the drums is their signature in any music they compose, different type of drums were invented to produce different paces. Others depend on string instruments to express their moods, the violen represented sadness and drama, while the piano can participate in all kind of moods. Music is considered the common language between different nations, that any one of any age and any language can understand.
In conclusion, music is one essential creative art that we can not live without. It survived by evolving through these years. Despite of the fact that it almost faded, but it always found its was back to the hearts of its audience, and managed to survive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1553030303 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76356066732 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8626847562 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0625 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360235933451 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112487578993 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106232144925 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20866739754 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727114416037 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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