Essay topics: Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. and whether you support them or not.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">It is irrefutable to say that, in the today's world the popularity of extreme sporting is deliberately increasing day by day. People would like to do dangerous sports like scuba diving, bungee jumping, water rafting and much more. I am inclined to believe that these adventures sports are dangerous but should be promoted on continuous guidance and surveillance. Some opine that these sports should be prohibited from playing.
To begin with, most of youth now a days are interested in playing these extreme sports which helps them to gain the self-confidence and independent attitude in them. Thus, making such adventures in their lifetime it a gigantic experience. These sports not only bring personal satisfaction but also fame. Furthermore, there is a lot fame and money involved in these sports. In addition, performers get worldwide attention and recognised.
On the other hand, while playing these dangerous sports there are so many examples of the cases where people were injured and died. And finally, repercussions are the loss of loved ones to their families. Adding, we should not marginalize the negative impacts caused while playing these sports
To reiterate, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that, the extreme sports should be encouraged in the youth and government or the organizing authorities should provide necessary equipment and training to the people who are performing these sports. Thus, there should a collaborative structure that need to be framed by the government along with the aspirants who were interested in playing these extreme sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...laying. To begin with, most of youth now a days are interested in playing these extreme...
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Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ng. To begin with, most of youth now a days are interested in playing these extreme...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, thus, while, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58333333333 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30392116458 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.1567210025 50.4703680194 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0817924751311 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299250998674 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421492468608 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0407043466851 0.151781067708 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323266709734 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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