It is compulsory for children to attend school between the ages of 5 and 16. Many people are in favor of raising the age at which children must start their schooling to 6 or 7, and the age at which they are allowed to stop to 17 or 18. People of this view believe it is important for young children to spend more time with their parents, while they believe teenagers would gain more from staying in school longer.
To what extent do you agree with this view.
Undeniably, it is true that between the ages of 5 and 16, it is necessary for children to attend school. There are majority of people who prefers to increase the age at which it is required for children to begin their schooling from 5 to 6 or 7 and 16 to 17 or 18 at which they are allowed to stop. I disagree with the statement and from my point of view the earlier age limit is proper.
Pitching in the first area of discussion there are many parents who want their infant to be with them for longer. This is the first reason behind their believe. Around the world, there are many parents who work for longer hours and are not able to give proper care to their child. For this purpose, they appoint a babysitter. The salary of babysitter is an cost to them and there are also one reason that is associated with it. It is child trafficking. Worldwide, there are many cases about child trafficking. For example, there is a high chance that the traffickers might have kept an eye over the child when the parent leaves the house and their child with the babysitter for work. They might break in the house and can abduct the child. In this case, the child is safer in school as compared to house.
Moving ahead, those parents with this perception that it is better to have the teenager to stay at school for longer time. This perception is wrong. There are many people whose child stays at school and pay huge sums of money to schools as fees. This is done to have their child to gain more. Besides this, they can have the child to help them out in their business and this is the great opportunity for the teenager to learn new skills and can adapt the work environment, where they will be working in the future.
To wrap up, it can be said that people need to recorder their decision in the context of their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'majorities'?
Suggestion: majorities
...or children to attend school. There are majority of people who prefers to increase the a...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
.... This is the first reason behind their believe. Around the world, there are many paren...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...babysitter. The salary of babysitter is an cost to them and there are also one rea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, so, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.357771261 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22739193741 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478005865103 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.7345481236 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2105263158 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57894736842 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375656686456 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114795992484 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133826464886 0.0667982634062 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257927324214 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.196289333534 0.056905535591 345% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 50.2224549098 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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