What are the differences between eating fresh food and canned food?
Eating food is essential for all of us, it keeps us alive and also gives us enjoyment at the same time. Nonetheless, each food differs from one to another. For example are the fresh food and the canned food. The most remarkable dissimilarity between these two kinds of food is the flavor. Fresh food normally brims with savour and taste in light of the fact that they keep up the majority of vitamins and minerals and they are consume within a short period of time. Canned food, on the other hand, frequently lack a lot of its flavor as some other chemical products have been added to extend their shelf life. By comparing both types of foods we notice another contradiction. Health is a factor that we should solicitous about. While the fresh food can keep their freshness and luscious because it does not contains any kind of preservatives, processed food lose some of the original nutrients when stored, and could also become poisonous if consumed often. Finally, fresh ingredients can prepare into a scrumptious home-cooked meals but will take a lot of time, whereas processed food requires less work, just open and serve. In conclusion, we should choose our food lies on our personal choice, based on time each person has, the money and the momentousness we give to our nutrtion and health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vour and taste in light of the fact that they keep up the majority of vitamins an...
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Line 1, column 429, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consumed'.
Suggestion: consumed
...y of vitamins and minerals and they are consume within a short period of time. Canned f...
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Line 1, column 452, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...als and they are consume within a short period of time. Canned food, on the other hand, freque...
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Line 1, column 810, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'contain'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: contain
...shness and luscious because it does not contains any kind of preservatives, processed fo...
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Line 1, column 810, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'contain'
Suggestion: contain
...shness and luscious because it does not contains any kind of preservatives, processed fo...
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Line 1, column 866, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...d of preservatives, processed food lose some of the original nutrients when stored, and cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, nonetheless, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56323098086 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669642857143 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8170765303 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4545454545 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438300572424 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173083289466 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1264363172 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.438300572424 0.151304729494 290% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.