Young people should be encouraged for visiting different countries which is beneficial for them in future do you agree or disagree
Visiting different countries is essential for everyone especially youngsters and younger people get international exposure when they travel in foreign countries.
I agree with the above mentioned statement below I mentioned following my view as below.
Young people should be encouraged for visiting foreign countries when they travel in different countries youngsters becomes independent and look themselves in new environment.they learn to manage finance and plan their future.thry share their views and learn language art and various cultures from other people if they face any problem in the previous experience.
It also help them to obtain a challenging job or business opportunity which would helpful for their career and learn different language culture standar of living and this all things boost their confidence level.
But every coin has two sides youngsters without supervision of parents in other countries they can influence by some bad vices like bad company and do illegal activities.they waste their valuable time for entertainment or spend their huge money for luxurious life and sometime they become drugs addicted or if they spend long time in other countries they could face homesickness depression they feel lonely
To conclude though young people should encourage for visiting different countries has some drawbacks but the other side more benefits for them it helps to gain an excellent career I the future.
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- Young people should be encouraged for visiting different countries which is beneficial for them in future do you agree or disagree 78
- Today we can see in all places women do the work but sometime they worry about their children so government should arrange the servant facilities who should take care for their children what is your opinion? 56
- Today we can see in all places women do the work but sometime they worry about their children so government should arrange the servant facilities who should take care for their children what is your opinion? 56
- Today we can see in all places women do the work but sometime they worry about their children so government should arrange the servant facilities who should take care for their children what is your opinion? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
... in the previous experience. It also help them to obtain a challenging job or bus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5520361991 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84988137955 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638009049774 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 182.684865274 49.4020404114 370% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.4 106.682146367 230% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.2 20.7667163134 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311768669106 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158267065726 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758965288561 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168494209384 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107377902616 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.8 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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