A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures.
Write a letter to the college head. In your letter:
Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about
Explain why would they be of interest to the students
Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to get permission for speaking about my country For college's international day. I come from iran and in that day I want to present my country's history and culture. iran has over 2500 years old which during this time, it is full of empires' rise and fallen, conquest and defeat and large number of scientists. From cultural point of view, iran maybe has the richest culture in the world. we have a lot of traditional and religious celebration and festival. Asa result, In my opinion iran would be very interesting subject that can be peresent.
I wonder if there is any necessary arrangement that I have to do before college's international day, like registration, coordination or any thing else.
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Amirreza Hashemi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to get permission for speak...
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Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Iran
...resent my countrys history and culture. iran has over 2500 years old which during th...
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Line 2, column 400, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...e has the richest culture in the world. we have a lot of traditional and religious...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...day, like registration, coordination or any thing else. I am looking forward to hear fr...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... any thing else. I am looking forward to hear from you. Yours Faithfully, Amirrez...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to hear from you. Yours Faithfully, Amirreza Hashemi
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, speaking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 670.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 136.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92647058824 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90670981312 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.720588235294 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.161773906 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4444444444 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0940476442174 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408176752723 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348653230761 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569198744801 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155057787813 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.