Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
music is the most important part of people life. Therefore, music is a possible way to connect people with various cultures and ages. Nowadays, some people cannot imagine their life without music and I completely agree with this statement and I will discuss in this essay.
Firstly, in the world have a different type of music that people love listening to what are they taste. For example, old ages people prefer to listen to slow and classical music and young generation are the opposite side that love listens to electro, deep house and various style of music. In addition, the well-known musician performs a concert in some country and in this concert come a huge number of people. Thus, there will accumulate a crowd of people which is from different countries, ages, and cultures.
Secondly, music plays a significant role in people life. For instance, it helps people have fun, relax and gives some motivation. With the help of music, people celebrate all kind of parties and entertainments that is a good way to bring people together. Additionally, due to music all countries will conduct important ceremonies and celebrate freedom and sing their national anthem which is people ought to take part in all ages. As a result, music can create harmony in people that can help to be friendly to each other and even if this would be from different countries and ages.
In conclusion, due to music can connect a lot of people from various country and nowadays it became very easy for people with help of internet. I believe that without the music world would be a boring place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Music
music is the most important part of people li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84191176471 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50871911634 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511029411765 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1910741116 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387828998883 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149929323627 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827919952774 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247894470847 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699532441784 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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