Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Laptop is the first thing that they should have to help their learning process. Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
The primary thing which everybody is supposed to have to assist their learning process is laptop. In accordance with this argument, this essay will explain the point of view of this issue and also put forward my perspective in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I do appreciate to the assumption which considered that laptop is absolutely pivotal for everyone for aiding individuals to learn about something. According to my perspective, I personally agree to this statement in which the presence of this temporary technology is able to help people obtaining more positive things. Nevertheless, the persons who believed it, moreover, have to think that this tool is not the merely aspect which is capable of aiding individuals to study, due to the fact that nowadays, there is a mobile phone which is additionally confer the similar outcome as laptop.
Regarding the perspective above, I tend to consider that the existence of mobile phone is going to replace the position of laptop. There are several contributing factors of it. It, first and foremost, is caused by the weight of mobile phone which is lighter instead of laptop, therefore, all individuals used it more frequently rather than laptop. Second but not less crucial, the price of mobile phone is usually lower instead of laptop which is in the end, it will influence the decreasing number of laptop utilisation.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that combining the use of these two modern technologies is the effective way to acquire more benefits to all people. Thus, in order to make it happen, the authority of every nation is supposed to inform this information to their citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03985507246 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82137055348 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1265447029 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.454545455 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168861152758 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653978908628 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060871381804 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973571385071 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443635941667 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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