Success in today’s society is measure in term of wealthy.To what extent do you agree with this definition of scuccess should take in to consideration?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , accomplishment
It is matter of concern that,accomplishment is not a richness of this society and i...
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Suggestion: , correcting
... society and it also composed of failure,correcting the mistakes,attitude,confidence and po...
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Suggestion: , attitude
...posed of failure,correcting the mistakes,attitude,confidence and positive vibes.This essa...
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Suggestion: This
...,attitude,confidence and positive vibes.This essay will discuss the value of success...
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... of life and community. To begin with,a person is succeeding in his life becaus...
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... of failure in every preliminary tenure.For instance,Jack Ma is a tycoon of e-shopp...
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...in every preliminary tenure.For instance,Jack Ma is a tycoon of e-shopping company,He...
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...ack Ma is a tycoon of e-shopping company,He has attended hundreds of interviews in ...
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Suggestion: , he
...ndreds of interviews in his life finally,he has failed in all interviews.Now,he the...
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Suggestion: Now
...finally,he has failed in all interviews.Now,he the is owner of one of the reputatio...
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...ally,he has failed in all interviews.Now,he the is owner of one of the reputation o...
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Suggestion: An
...cessary in all stages of own experience.An effort we have put in our ambition that...
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Suggestion: , another
... step to succeed in society. To ahead,another vital point is behaviour,self-esteem an...
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Suggestion: , self-esteem
...o ahead,another vital point is behaviour,self-esteem and positive vibration.We are putting h...
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Suggestion: We
...iour,self-esteem and positive vibration.We are putting hundred percent of attitude...
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...m and positive vibration.We are putting hundred percent of attitude at work that shows ...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...e at work that shows us right direction.Secondly,whenever,we lose our self-confidence d...
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Suggestion: , whenever
...k that shows us right direction.Secondly,whenever,we lose our self-confidence during at ...
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Suggestion:
... us right direction.Secondly,whenever,we lose our self-confidence during at work ...
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Suggestion: , we
...nfidence during at work or any other job,we have to think positive to achieve a goa...
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Suggestion: , we
...ink positive to achieve a goal. Moreover,we have to keep-on follow our plan unless ...
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Suggestion: Finally
...follow our plan unless we reach our aim.Finally,every successful person drops out their...
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Suggestion: , every
...our plan unless we reach our aim.Finally,every successful person drops out their colle...
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Suggestion: , in
...om wealthy family. To put in nutshell,in the current scenario,many people ponder...
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... put in nutshell,in the current scenario,many people ponder,every accomplish comes fr...
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... the current scenario,many people ponder,every accomplish comes from highness that is ...
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...sh comes from highness that is not true.It is purely from failure,self-motivation ...
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Suggestion: , self-motivation
...at is not true.It is purely from failure,self-motivation and positive vibration etc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6038647343 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.46094919042 2.71678728327 164% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.5024630542 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6579400651 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 193.333333333 104.977214359 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.9669160288 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.25397266985 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.33497536946 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0375911656191 0.242375264174 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0188788226555 0.0925447433944 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257735376953 0.071462118173 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0251232065692 0.151781067708 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280914088698 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 12.6369458128 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 53.1260098522 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.9458128079 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.94827586207 206% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.3980295567 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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