There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take. Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?
Though the evolution of mobile phone have changed the model of communication and had provide some Technical Advancement. In this epoch I will like to argue about the concerned which are associated with usage of mobile phones that harms once technically, socially and medically. Although, there are certain advantage associated with this trend of using mobiles, rather there are plethora of adverse effects.
To embark, this trend we have share of benefits. Firstly, there are plenty of social networking site which is evident for swift communication with advancement in user interface. One of the example is whatsapp which is used by millions.
Furthermore, it is also utilized as technical gadget which have lot of functions. It is not only used for communication but also for the storage of memory. For example a light weight phone can save upto 1 Terabytes of data that is portable and convenient for use. In addition to, mobile also carries medical benefits. Nowadays an appointment with a doctor over a mobile phone and it's innovative idelogy for those who cannot commute from one place to another.
Despite of having several positive factors, certainly there or drawbacks also ;however, strongest is social disturbance. Usage of social networking sites like Facebook can be very dangerous and what caused battles between religion if misused. It can also be argued that it, medically it is proven by scientist that over uses of these technical gadgets is disastrous for human as it directly affect some part of the brain. According to the study in Oxford University it has been found that continuous usage of mobile can cause insomnia. While there are a lot of technical barriers as usage of mobile requires data connection battery backup and number of favourable softwares and sometimes become irritating to humans.
In conclusion, while there are certain pros, it is largely counterproductive instrument as it cause plethora of social problem and vital for medical well being of an individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20679012346 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84492739331 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570987654321 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6838488218 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2352941176 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222473610067 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685990787341 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391031286931 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120910176975 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485372712531 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.