Some people think that Deterrence is best than treating. Exploring and curing pathological conditions is quite expensive and it is superior to spend in the precautionary policies. In this essay, I shall emphasize the views of both treatment and preventative measures and suggest my view point.
As we all know research is applied for treating an ailment. Hence, experiencing heavy expenditure. However, it is certain to explore the treatment and bear the huge expenses. Similarly, once the treatment is found, preventive measures studies must be encouraged. Furthermore, the preventive policy anticipates the cause and administrating can prevent the onset of such diseases in the future.
As we all often come across the saying, " prevention is better than cure ", Firstly, it is very important to understand the medical context in which the statement is referring to. As the case is, both the views need in-depth of research in actuality to a solution.
Secondly, when it is assumed generally that investment is huge for the treatment than prevention, indeed it is correct, but only after an initial phase of research. Whether it be a treatment or preventive measure - research is required. And it is in no way a better option to invest in preventive measure alone until the treatment is explored.
In conclusion, it is absolutely correct that prevention is better than cure, but only when we know the treatment and prevention methods. And both the methods involve equal expenditure at an initial stage exploring it. Indeed, in the future, prevention measures will cost less than treatment cause it would be easier to adhere to the measures which we already know.
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but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, second, secondly, similarly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25925925926 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01035170568 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7155546529 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359517276058 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108729122879 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846320653875 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195570908891 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057409008944 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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