Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
some people claim that these days main environmental problems of the planet nature is losing some species of trees and animals. Others believe that there are so many important environmental problems.
Firstly, in the recent decades lack of valuable species of trees are massive reduction can be seen which leads to occurrence of major environment">environmental problems because deforestation is a worsening the things. For example, a tiny species also protects the atmosphere and the large plant species plays greater echo system also, variety of crops protection. As long as, we protect the trees the species saves environment from disaster. Secondly, to save the human kind scientist conduct experiments on animals as a result it is reduction in their quantity.
many people says, the recent decades the pollution is increasing enormously conversely, population is increasing dramatically. For example, everyone using their own's vehicle, this leads to air pollution of combustion fossil fuels. In major cities, industries are increasing rapidly, it evacuates chemical pollution and industrial raw waste which tends to reduction of land resources. Here is one more example, more number of communication towers emits higher amount of radiation frequency which is more prone to all species.
In conclusion, there are several factors of deterioration of environment, cutting out huge number of trees becoming deforestation and chemical industries waste expels leads to land resources, communication towers emits higher frequency radiation. these all will deteriorate global surface and becoming ozone layer depletion. To overcome this issue, the government and every individual as responsibilities to protect the globe for our future generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76833976834 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41311431015 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606177606178 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1743705055 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.923076923 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193962789494 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068324548374 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839718737252 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140534939274 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132479425463 0.056905535591 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.