Environmental issues have become a major concern of our time, and many believe that extinction of specific species of plants and animals is the major threat. However, the consequences of climate change are alarming and therefore, the debate is rather complex, as we shall see here.
On the one hand, people who support the idea point to the ecological changes while highlighting the imbalances in the ecological system. They state the example of a particular food chain, where If the number declines for the tiger, the figure for deer rises significantly which leads to disappearance of grasslands and consequently leads to disappearance of other species depending on the grass fields as their food source is in scarcity. Furthermore, the people who support go further mentioning the negative effects caused by specific tree loss. They mention data showing the dependent animals losing their habitats as a result. Moreover, such occurrence makes the situation even more grave as these animals rely on these trees for food as well.
In contrast, the opponents count climatic changes as the root cause of the recent rise in natural disasters. It is true that floods, tsunamis and other calamities related to sea level rising are occurring more frequently than before causing people to lose their houses, business and thousands of dollars. Furthermore, they think that due to extreme weather our planet is changing rapidly, and the consequences are probably far flung than we can assume. While indicate the global rise in the temperature and the changed patterns in seasons they indicate that these are continuously damaging our farming and it's produce. It seems that animal habitats and ecological chains are also not safe from these effects. Recent researches also support this view and many experts are persistently expressing their concerns about the global food crisis. It appears that the issue of changed climate is far more severe and can be called a major threat to life itself on our planet.
In conclusion, I feel the extinction of different trees and other lives certainly has its major impacts, however, The changing patterns in climate can lead us towards a catastrophe where life itself could be under danger due to food scarcity and that is a possibility there for both -- humans and animals.
- The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013 73
- The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013 73
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport Disucss both thes 78
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 5.60731707317 624% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 965.302439024 201% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 375.0 196.424390244 191% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.176 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 3.73543355544 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71477684127 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 106.607317073 197% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 283.868780488 215% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3164604062 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.4 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 5.23603664747 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 1.13902439024 966% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139881804944 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458203255337 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395088111669 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833646150134 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336306615099 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 40.7170731707 243% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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