Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Whether responsibility for climatic change should be on the shoulders of progressed nations or on evolving countries is a matter for debate. many people have the notion that advanced countries should take upper hand to compete with environmental problems, however others states that all nations are equally responsible. I have the opinion that developed nations need to contribute more to get rid of nature issues, as they do more harm to the nature.
support from every place is indeed to solve these issues and this is the reason why some people argue all nation's influence. Since climatic variation is due to the after effects of human activities, each people have to involve in competing with this issue. To cite an example, cutting down trees, breaching through forests for shelters and so on in developing countries results in climatic change. Thereby, controlling of these actions are necessary by the under developed nations to get rid of this problem.
many people including me support the aforementioned view that enhanced countries should do more to alleviate this condition, as these nations contribute more harm to environment. To illustrate this, the countries which are fully developed have much amount of e-wastes and plastic wastes than other places. Above mentioned products cause more hazards to the nature and as a result weather conditions may change. Therefore, for evolved nations it is mandatory to take high control to solve these problems of nature.
In conclusion, even though it is the duty of every person to take care of the nature, the expanded countries indeed take upper hand to alleviate the harms done to nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19029850746 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70977486469 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7579545427 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.916666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285141054104 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100884378232 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610615448112 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167141784489 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081975933787 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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