In many countries smoking in now illegal in public places. Do you agree or disagree?
smoking is a serious problem that have to be considered with immediate effect.In many foreign countries cigarette smoking got banned in certain public places to ensure good health for the people.I firmly agree that every country should abandon the use of cigarette in common places.
The first and foremost reason to hold this notion is that smoking cause issues not only to the smoker but also to the person who is near by.Since in public areas more people will be present and there will be a chance to occur passive smoking,which results in health problems to others. Thiswill make an unhealthy society and could spoil the balance of the nation.To cite an example,many wives of chain smokers got affected by lung cancer due to the intake of smoke which is expelled while smoking.Thus,public smoking threatens others, who are exposed to the smoke and thereby the nation also.
What is more,public smoking encourage youngsters to try it.When children see someone smoking in front of them,they try to know about that and make an effort to use it once.If young people started using this cigarette,there is a great chance to become chain smoker.As an illustration,many teenagers got addicted to smoking because they imitated others ,who smoke.Thus smoking publically will ruin the future of young generation.
In conclusion,though banning of public smoking is a restriction on human rights,it it " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">should be executed,as it cause many threats to other human beings and their health.I hope the governments in every country would solve this common disaster in an effective way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, while, in conclusion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39325842697 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17998481772 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63670411985 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1709388129 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 288.0 106.682146367 270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.4 20.7667163134 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.2 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213876325299 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120954341757 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655239791547 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139092270003 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616906076482 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 13.0946893788 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.23 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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