Your company has decided to organise a training course for the ploys at the local Convention centre. They have asked you to contact the manager of the local Convention centre. Write a letter to the manager of local Convention Centre
-explain the details of the training course
-tell him what all facilities you would like to have for your training course
-ask him about the facilities at the conventional sent
Dear sir,
I am Harry sandhu, senior technical manager of the Citizen bank in Greenwich Avenue. Our company has organized a thirty days advanced software training for a group of fifteen employees. I am writing this letter to rent your convention centre for next month and inform you about our requirements.
During this course of training, we would be guided by a senior software developer about the upgraded banking software. He would be giving us the presentations and lectures. our staff would carry their own official laptops and all other official equipment’s like printer, chargers, stationery and so on.
These are the following facilities that we would acquire from you. A big conference hall with projector setting to give presentation along with the seating arrangements of fifteen people is a must. Further, to inform you that the timings of training would be 9 am to 4 pm. we also request you to prepare vegetarian meal for our staff through those days. Lunch timings would be from 1pm to 1.30 pm, while that time we need some free seats in your cafeteria. I believe that your cafeteria could offer a coffee and tea. Last but not the least, we need two hygienically cleaned washrooms for our trainees.
Looking forward a positive response from you regarding this matter. For any questions, you could contact me at 401-256-9965
<span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:107%;
font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;mso-fareast-font-family:Calibri;mso-fareast-theme-font:
minor-latin;color:black;mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:EN-US;
mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">Yours faithfully ,</span>
Harry Sandhu
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| 2018-02-20 | shiwani1 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir, I am Harry sandhu, senior technical man...
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... and inform you about our requirements. During this course of training, we would...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...ving us the presentations and lectures. our staff would carry their own official la...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lly cleaned washrooms for our trainees. Looking forward a positive response from...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sans-serif
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Suggestion: , ...guage:AR-SA'>Yours faithfully , Harry Sandhu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 937.175257732 153% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16738197425 4.54256449028 136% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.69972432115 2.54303337028 342% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673819742489 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7986691303 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119074298488 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403098065762 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493164732279 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0471830848638 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639176094357 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 8.37731958763 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.21 8.71597938144 209% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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