you can better education from experience is better from classroom

Grammar and spelling errors:
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When hiring top manager as chief executive manager , general man...
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... top manager as chief executive manager , general manager to run a business , emp...
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...ager , general manager to run a business , employer choose between having high exp...
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...en having high experience more than five years as same position and holding high ...
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...ce years. In other mean higher education , higher performance versus higher exper...
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... years. In other mean higher education , higher performance versus higher experie...
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...her performance versus higher experience ,higher performance . holding high ...
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...us higher experience ,higher performance . holding high experience manage co...
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...her experience ,higher performance . holding high experience manage company a...
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... experience ,higher performance . holding high experience manage company as same ...
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...any as same manner as previous institute . they use same method to recognize high ...
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... as same manner as previous institute . they use same method to recognize high perfo...
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...od to recognize high performance. Almost , they success in getting over traditiona...
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...success in getting over traditional risk , imply target and obtain high income. In...
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...get and obtain high income. In such case , successful come from their experience i...
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...xperience in solving same situation. It sound good in rapid unchangeable environment...
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...g same situation. It sound good in rapid unchangeable environment with expected ...
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... good in rapid unchangeable environment with expected risk with certainty.This ...
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...angeable environment with expected risk with certainty.This is often occurs in u...
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...ent with expected risk with certainty.This is often occurs in undeveloped countrie...
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...ducation system and unqualified skills. In another side , employer prefer hold...
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...lified skills. In another side , employer prefer holding high degree .th...
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...de , employer prefer holding high degree .they argue that holding high degree can ...
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...h degree can perform with unusual matter , make up new idea to over come problem, ...
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...blem, avoid expected and unexpected risk . seldom, holding degree fall to success....
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... degree fall to success. This is always happen in culture having unopened mind who imp...
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...room without consider economic condition , countries law and regulation , governan...
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...condition , countries law and regulation , governance and other standard. In ...
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...ion , governance and other standard. In summary , education getting from expe...
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...ance and other standard. In summary , education getting from experience is as...
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... important as education from classroom. employer have to balance between them , possessi...
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...m. employer have to balance between them , possessing education from experience , ...
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...m , possessing education from experience , often used in traditional situation , s...
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...ce , often used in traditional situation , solving known problem which happened a...
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...in traditional situation , solving known problem which happened actually , moreov...
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...g known problem which happened actually , moreover, utilize incredible manner to ...
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...ronment coming with unexpected high risk .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, moreover, so, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 242.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89256198347 4.8611393121 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87243400546 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619834710744 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.7101700048 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.833333333 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.5376344086 704% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175551605055 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800412031421 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123164181257 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11856647639 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947358335754 0.0645574589148 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.1575268817 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 10.9000537634 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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