you have to chose between buying a house or business if you have enough money
I got money from my grandfather after his death. My friends ask me how i invest these amount ? One of them suggests that I buy a house and rent it or resell or to set up a business instate to deposit this money in banks due to the dramatic decrease of interest . I compare between the two option to get the worth one as cited bellow
The purchase of house may a good investment and still attract people who aim to recognize profit without make effort and they do not like to invest in share it seems a good idea but unfortunately, finding an honest tenant who pays rents without on time is difficult at our days.
In addition, buying house is not essay so you must choose a suitable place , looking for a well design house with lower cost, be sure that the land and building "property and licence, find out information about real state companies, their product and chose the best one
Moving to people who believe in high profit with high risk and hard- working, we think that set up a business is as difficult to invest in getting house. Set up business needs to decide its products, carry out its product customer, their need suppliers, competitors , law and regulation such as tax law, investment law, environmental law if it related to product that effect air and atmosphere.
In addition, many business require a basic knowledge and ownership learning about product progress. More over , run up a business request high skills employer so choosing between candidate is a tired process. Furthermore , we insist if you rely on machine or manpower.
on the whole , getting on business is complicated and very exhausting process , which include a high risk
In my view, investment in either buying a house or manage a business depends on the people preference in other words people who desire to obtain fixed income, with moderate risk invest in buying and rent house and people like to work and high risk get on business
- in difficult situation some people react calmy while others react with panic how to you react in different situation use specific details and example to support your answer 80
- some people place high valued to loyalty to employer , others think they change job to build career , discuss the two position then indicate which position to you agree with and why 76
- you can better education from experience is better from classroom 60
- you have to chose between buying a house or business if you have enough money 76
- some people place high valued to loyalty to employer , others think they change job to build career , discuss the two position then indicate which position to you agree with and why 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, still, well, in addition, such as, in my view, in other words, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70118343195 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61142641675 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579881656805 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.257890261 48.9658058833 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.9 100.406767564 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8 20.6045352989 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 5.45110844103 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192451260257 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723757989341 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480251523477 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889405766128 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515017282011 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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