Nowadays people believe in science and prefer evidence rather than just blindly following customs. Especially the current younger generations, who have little idea about their culture or traditions. On the contrary, people in the past placed utmost importance on nurturing and passing on their knowledge to others. This could be due to the practical approach and disinterest of younger generations. In order to improve the situation, parents should enlighten children about their traditions and encourage them to participate in their cultural activities.
To begin with, children don't seem to be interested in understanding their history. Moreover, they like to question and analyze traditions before deciding to follow them . According to a recent survey on immigrant children, many were not aware of their roots and customs followed by their people and aligned themselves with the culture of their residing country. Such ignorance leads to a decline and ultimately in the death of tradition.
Parents play a major role in imparting knowledge and encouraging younger generations to partake in traditional activities. They should patiently answer the child's questions and try to reason out the importance of maintaining them. To illustrate, children should be made aware that Christmas is not only a festival to party and burn crackers but traditionally it was more about sharing and alms giving to the under privileged. Hence, people go around carol singing and spread the Christmas joy. Such situations will help them understand and decide for themselves the value of traditionally followed practices.
To conclude, it is extremely difficult to immediately convince the younger generations to change their beliefs and forcing them to do so will only aggravate the situation. However, a small step taken now can go a long way, and maybe in the future, these same people might be the flag bearers of traditions!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42140468227 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93336931796 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612040133779 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9289717787 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.3125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193418616764 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581919475529 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354229355429 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111256182521 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503112351704 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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