Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your housefalt.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter,
• Explain the reasons for the noise
• Apologise
• Describe what action you will take
Dear Jonathan,
With regard to your previous letter, I am writing to apologise for the noise coming from my home. I hope the levels of noise have not been a serious effect on the welfare of your family.
Let me explain why our dog barks constantly at night. In fact, we were forced to separate her from her brother about two weeks ago. Since then, she began barking continuously and we have been unable to make her quiet. Unfortunately, we underestimated the repercussion of separating them from each other, thereby taking necessary precautions.
I am deeply sorry for any inconvenience we have made it. Admittedly, we should have been more cautious before splitting them. I hope that we tackle the problem as soon as possible.
Actually, we have had a dog trainer teach our dog to deal with her new situation properly. The dog trainer has ensured us that the problem of our dog will be fully resolved within one month.
I am striving to solve the problem in order not to bother you anymore. I sincerely apologise again for the nuisance we caused.
Regards,
Shahin Nejati.
- Nowdays, many people spend less and less time at home.What are the causes of this? What are the effects of this on individuals and on society? 84
- You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter•Provide information about yourself•Give details of your previous work experience•Say why the company should 78
- Some people think that a good diet and exercise are not necessary for a health and long life. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your housefalt.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter,•Explain the reasons for the noise•Apologise•Describe what action you will take 87
- Some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in the school. Do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jonathan, With regard to your previous letter, I a...
^^^
Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in for the nuisance we caused. Regards, Shahin Nejati.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, so, then, in fact, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79144385027 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69563276174 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663101604278 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.572725426 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.0 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3571428571 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184718987388 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586625871065 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744769819464 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108649176001 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117665707698 0.0580467560999 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.