You recently bought some food at the supermarket, but, when you go home , you found that the food was in bad condition. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter,
explain what happened to you , give details of the day and time of purchase.
ask the manager he/she intends to do about your experience.
Dear sir,
I am Harry Singh, a regular customer of your renowned super market. I am writing this letter to complain you about the food I bought from your store and the consequences I had to struggle with.
It was Saturday evening, 22nd june and I came back from my long official meeting. I purchased a packed salad bowl, a bottle of orange juice and few other grocery items also. Since I did not had lunch, I was really hungry so I ate half of the salad with juice on my way to home.
However, the time I reached home, I started vomiting and felt severe headache. It was very unusual so I just checked what I ate and I was shocked to see that the salads were expired and it was the reasons for my poor health condition.
The least I request from you is that please look into this matter seriously. The package number of salad bowl is B114568, please remove all those lot from your aisle and also check other eatable items with expiry dates so that such mishappening does not repeat.
I have enclosed my order bill along with time date and expired items highlighted.
Hoping for a prompt action from you in this matter.
Yours Sincerely
Harry singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...range juice and few other grocery items also. Since I did not had lunch, I was reall...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...her grocery items also. Since I did not had lunch, I was really hungry so I ate hal...
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Line 9, column 141, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this lot' or 'those lots'?
Suggestion: this lot; those lots
...alad bowl is B114568, please remove all those lot from your aisle and also check other ea...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49765258216 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25684418526 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9888196138 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170922426213 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062084454279 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066148073523 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867941345118 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597614247784 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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