You recently bought some food at a supermarket, but, when you got home, you found that the food was in bad condition.
Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket
- explain what happened to you.
- give details of the day and time of purchase
- ask the manager what he/she intends to do about your experience.
Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is XYZ and I am writing this letter to make a complaint about a bad food product which I bought from your store located near the city bus station.
Yesterday, on 21st April, I visited the supermarket to purchase some groceries, dairy products as well as some snacks. It was my parents’ anniversary and I wanted to surprise them by bringing their favorite dessert. Hence, after I finished all other shopping, I went to the dessert counter and decided to buy the carrot pudding.
However, when I reached home and open the packet, there was an unusual smell coming from the pudding and I saw a layer of fungus on the top. To be honest, it was frustrating experience for me and my plan to surprise my parents back-fired. I have been purchasing from your shop since many years, but this was the first time I faced this issue.
I am requesting you to let me know what further actions you are going to take on this matter. I hope that there will be improved quality checks from your side and customers should not deal with such problems in future.
Hoping for a prompt action and reply from your side and thanking you in advance for your kind assistance.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s you are going to take on this matter. I hope that there will be improved qualit...
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Line 9, column 209, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...mers should not deal with such problems in future. Hoping for a prompt action and rep...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d assistance. Yours faithfully, XYZ
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6267281106 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47962830255 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.369361537 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2727272727 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172761875825 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550873492166 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554427251314 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879844936483 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226905550388 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.