Some people believe that the major cause of the adverse environmental issues in the contemporary world is the annihilation of biodiversity, while others are of the opinion that it has manifold significant reasons. In my view, though the extinction of diverse range of living organisms and creatures is one of the concerns for ecological imbalance, there are various factors which plays a pivotal role in destroying the beauty of nature.
To begin with, the deforestation activities and logging for urbanization by the humans and killing of animals to obtain byproducts can be stated as the prime cause for the disappearance of biodiversity. If the trees and organisms do not retain the harmony of ecology, several pollutants will demolish the community and will impact on the life of plant and animals in an appalling manner. For instance, a survey conducted by the National Environmental Council of USA reveals that the lands with dense vegetation and the existence of animals keep their community bloomy and long-lived. In this way, the extinction of flora and fauna from the natural habitat is considered as a critical reason for the destruction of the environment.
However, there are several other issues for the degradation of the ecosystem. Firstly, the contamination of air by the emission of carbon fumes causing air pollution, making it prone to health diseases such as asthma and bronchitis to a massive number of population. Secondly, the befouling of water due to the disposal of plastic bags and harmful chemicals in the rivers and lakes poses a serious threat to human existence and marine creatures in the near future. To illustrate, a study by Water Conservation Board confides that on a global scale, 2 million tons of sewage, agricultural and industrial waste enters the world’s water every day which also leads to increase in mortality rates.
In conclusion, although the attenuation of plants and animals is regarded as the reason for the abasement of the environment by some people, in my opinion, there are multifarious factors such as air pollution and water pollution which are vulnerable to be detrimental for the survival of homosapiens and biodiversity.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
- Nowadays, many people have to work longer time and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons ? What can employers do to make their life easier ? 56
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 11
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are some more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 73
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22662889518 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07952208161 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558073654391 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4180207585 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.727272727 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0909090909 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0933251373417 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363460133368 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477997186767 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620890264763 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420961372925 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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