According to some, accepted behavior of difficulties, including unexpected job or miserable living conditions is ideal, whereas others moot that they should make great effort to overcome obstacles and qualify their lives. In my view, the ambition to strive and develop ourselves to reach higher levels have bigger contributions to our society as well as our families. This essay will discuss, how unfavorable circumstances affects a family living, and why one should always push itself to raise its socio economic status in the present competitive world.
Many people satisfy with their dismal status although they have never had desire for it when they were younger. I believe this will hamper their growth towards their career path and will lead to an uncertain future. For example, students who have been under the age of 23-30 years, found to attempt suicide due to low salary and long working hours jobs as they did not study earlier when they were in their high school. This makes them pessimistic and perceive that the journey to their success is over and they cannot do anything to improve this.
However, there is a massive number of optimistic individuals who have been struggling hard, continue expanding their abilities and never give up. They devote seamless efforts to achieve their aspirations and bring happiness in their families too. For this reason, I would agree that every individual should believe in itself and always tries to push hard to face difficulties of life and attain greater heights of success. For instance, in the developed countries, there are many overseas pupils who attempts to undertake part time jobs along with studies for the sake of meeting their living expenses instead of receiving funds from their families. This makes them more confident and adaptable to live in foreign countries.
In conclusion, for the one who wants to reach at the greater levels of triumph, one should always seek to improve its circumstances by putting religious efforts towards their goals and earn a good living standard. That being said, the successful people are those who believe that they can change obstacles into strength and can conquer any tough challenges.
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are some more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 93
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are some more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 73
- Nowadays, many people have to work longer time and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons ? What can employers do to make their life easier ? 56
- You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter,introduce yourselfexplain what experience and special skills you havetell him/her when you think you could start 56
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 737, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...centrate on the given responsibilities. Thus it proves that accepting a worst situat...
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Line 3, column 767, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...bilities. Thus it proves that accepting a worst situation can assist a person to ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can assist a person to excel in life. However, there are a number of optimisti...
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Line 5, column 514, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...verseas pupils who attempt to undertake part time jobs along with studies for the sake of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05361930295 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7911692829 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595174262735 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6647584842 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.882352941 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203153709243 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659430142501 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676780392022 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130173150865 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108690697059 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.