Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement, we surely should know about events aound the world. And actually, as the technology is developing, the information is explosive, the intention of keeping us even from the awareness of the world is unpractical.

Nowadays, the relationship between countries is tighter. They interacted mutually in several aspects. It is hardly to make the conclusion that the things happend around the world get nothing to do with our daily life. They will indirectly take influence on our daily life in the end. For instance, the international policy of exporting and importing goods will make a great impact on the finally cost we pay for the consuming.

Secondly, paying attention on the international events could help our to construct our view of world gradually. Without the view, your horizon could be so narrow to expand. This view include religious, nationalism, and so on.

Comparing with the same problems around the world could facilitate your understanding of the domestic problems. For example, as a woman, I am inclined to foucus on the statues of women in my country. In the past, women used to sacrifice themselves to the whole family, they played several roles as daughters, wifes and mothers but still hardly to be respected. When observe the same problem around the world, I find more and more people come out and become feminists. I am convinced, the future of our women is bright.

Shortly, I agree the statement and keep insist on know events over the world. They could help us to know what happened in domestic situation and enhance our knowledge.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 184, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'includes'.
Suggestion: includes
...could be so narrow to expand. This view include religious, nationalism, and so on. C...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 269.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02973977695 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80309723334 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57249070632 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9000920472 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5882352941 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280877843252 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783170446644 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687976768453 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14802759541 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606806292591 0.0645574589148 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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