The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is often true that people have different views concerning whether obtaining a high income when choosing any position, while there is some truth in claiming that a better work atmosphere is the most considerable. I personally believe that having a satisfiable salary is the most essential choice. .
On the one hand, there are two principle reasons why new candidates could argue that better atmosphere at work is the most significant parameter. To illustrate, the first influencer in improving the working atmosphere is the acknowledgement of management toward the newly joined employee. Thus, if the direct manager acknowledges his subordinate, this would substantially increase the enthusiasm among his team, which eventually lead to more achievements and leverage the production. Secondary, the motivation from the management plays a vital role in enhancing the working atmosphere and strengthen the team spirit. A recent survey of 1,000 newly comer employees by one of multinational recruitment agency showed that, seven out of ten staff is target oriented if only motivates at work. Consequently, the notion of a better working atmosphere is predominant than high income.
nevertheless, others advocate that high income is the main goal when choosing a new career, in order to live a better lifestyle away from the breadline, and they concur with the said notion the more income the more outcome. And this appears clearly when searching for jobs in LinkedIn; it is noticeable that the high salary jobs are rapidly occupied than other low to moderate salary positions.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me firmly that the benefits of the perfect working atmosphere are eclipsed by the merits of high-income salary, it is, thus, recommended that the job seekers should search for high income when applying to any career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...le salary is the most essential choice. . On the one hand, there are two princi...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nevertheless
...here is predominant than high income. nevertheless, others advocate that high income is th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29553264605 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99357188034 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594501718213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9564714582 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.090909091 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177733813768 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661838051331 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601325163086 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126642786425 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586737759666 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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