Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. DISCUSS both views and give your opinion.
Dealing with negative circumstances has been always an issue of debate among people. While some people claim that acceptance of such situations is the best way to tackle them, others, including me, believe that struggling to enhance our lives is of far more effectiveness.
On the one hand, people who adopt surrender as a significant method to deal with troubles believe that it is a sort of faith to do so. As is their destinies were meant to be different, they would not have suffered in the first place. For instance, a person who is born with a disability has to accept his destiny in order to find the inner peace, in addition, not to cause pain or sense of guiltiness among their beloved ones. That is to say, acceptance is the gate to free and relieved souls.
On the other hand, I hold the notion that defeating improper situations is the most remarkable route for satisfaction. Human beings should make the best of every opportunity, and they have to seek all the possible ways in order to surpass even the seemingly impossible situations. Mohammed Salah, who is one of the greatest football players of all times, was born and bred in low- standard conditions. Moreover, he was expelled from his team for lack of competence. Knowing that hard work always pays off, Salah pursued his dream, improved his performance, and his perspective of life. Consequently, he plays now for Barcelona, which is one of the most reputable clubs. Thus, working hard can unleash our full potentials.
To conclude, although some people may think that it is better to accept what we already have in order to enjoy peacefulness in life, I reiterate that humans ought to do their best to improve their lives and accomplish the sense of fulfillment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, sort of, in the first place, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80666666667 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73985198303 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8850344602 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128164574287 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357849831084 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491360026379 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854693476999 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428717057588 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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