Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Being well-operated is such an important skill that children should learn at the young age not only at home but also by the teachers at school. Although this might bring many controversies, the point is how the parents and the school teach our children, as I thought.
Naturally, parents must bring up their kids until they turn 18. For that time, the kids are taught about basic knowledge of surrounding life, controlling their behavior and expressing the emotions suitably in every circumstances by their parents or relatives. This principle is suppose to play the main reason making a good citizen. For example, the kid with the guides of parents and good manners are more successful in daily life just by hiss/her selective sentences and body language in conversations, whereas the arrogant guys without basic education, lacking respect for everybody, who usually want to rebel, are commonly failed in life because of their impolite actions.
Otherwise, if the parents are too busy and couldn't spend time for their children, they had better send their kids to school. It is easy to understand that because at school, teacher would represent the parents teaching the young every useful subjects in order to develop common and specific information of every fields. Beside, by getting their hands on various tasks at school with friends, students are more likely to treasure friendships and range up their social skills.
To summarize, both parents and schools are playing important roles in teaching the good citizen because of each advantages they brought.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...parents or relatives. This principle is suppose to play the main reason making a good c...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...erwise, if the parents are too busy and couldnt spend time for their children, they had...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20158102767 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63826220075 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0387233367 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.6 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164729510433 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745639476006 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530205131366 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119127778917 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537175615414 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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