Impact of fast food on our society is enormous, consumption of fast food has increased tremendously in modern times leading to many harmful conditions. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I would like to discuss my perspectives in the subject matter.
Firstly, it is an undeniable fact that with no or little time to cook in our busy life we often tend to lean towards the food which are precooked and readily available in market. All the precooked meals or fast foods are filled with high fat contents which has harmful impacts on human body. Additionally, it is been identified that around 50% of teenagers in countries such as America enjoy eating fast food because of its delicious taste without understanding the consequences behind it. Fast foods often lead to different diseases such as Obesity, cardiovascular problems and accumulation of bad cholesterol.
Secondly, irrespective of the fact that fast food has tremendous bad impacts on human heath, nothing much is done to prevent this phenomenon. Advertisements companies such as Mac-Donald's, Pizza Hut are putting their entire efforts to attract people to try and eat their food. This is a grim matter of concern as majority of the population in different countries have an obesity rate much higher than ever imagined. Personally, I believe that people should understand the true health hazards linked with the consumption of fast food.
Hence in conclusion, the foregoing discussion will propounds to the view that it is extremely harmful to eat fast foods. Governments should set up proper laws and regulations to ensure that the kind of food given to individuals should not contain any harmful substances to impact human health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: now
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Suggestion: try to
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'propound'
Suggestion: propound
...nclusion, the foregoing discussion will propounds to the view that it is extremely harmfu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19343065693 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96381151542 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609489051095 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1131652159 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.583333333 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396597100673 0.242375264174 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143512974451 0.0925447433944 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104986982656 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245329112738 0.151781067708 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627249614352 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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