Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students; others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views which view do you agree with? Explain why?
Education becomes necessary in our life especially for people who want to be successful person and education is one of tools to support us become a good character. People say that higher education which we get, we can get better personality too. They believe that higher education should be available only to good students. While several people agree with the statement, the others think that study in a university or college should be available to all students. Analyzing both of views will show this.
First of all, they believe that higher education only for good students. For example in Indone...
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Sentence: She is a good student so she can enter in a best college in Indonesia.
Description: The token a is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to a and best
Sentence: Good students and a university are cannot be separated each other.
Description: The fragment and a university is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: Also, it is about less than decimates discrepancy of education.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to decimates and discrepancy
not only to good students but also bad students.
not only to good students but also to bad students.
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