Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that the education system in a country plays a vital role in its development. While many people argue that tertiary education should be available to only gifted students, I am of the opinion that universities and colleges should provide places for all students.
On the one hand, the idea of giving university education to only bright students may be reasonable to some extent. It is because pursuing a bachelor degree is a demanding task, which requires the students to have a good knowledge background to catch up with advanced and specialized knowledge quickly and effectively. For example, critical decision making and lateral thinking are often performed by intelligent individuals in their daily lives. Only accepting good students can make the best use of the university education and improve educational outcomes, helping create skilled workers and professionals.
On the other hand, I believe that all students should be entitled to attend post-secondary education. First, not only the most gifted students can follow the advanced education in university but those who have determination and ability to self-study are also able to make it, yet at a slower pace. Therefore, no students should be restricted from higher education to pursue their own goals. Moreover, giving the chance to attend higher education for all students can motivate students who are less capable to study harder. It is because getting university certifications is seen as a passport to better job opportunities and possibly higher earning levels in the future.
To conclude, while it may be feasible that only good students should be accepted to enroll in tertiary institutions, I still believe that it should be the right of all high school graduates so they can pursue their career goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23693379791 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92856676484 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5112345369 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.516179671272 0.244688304435 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178497864163 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115091391772 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301937972432 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449199452733 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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