Some people think all lawbreakers should be put into prison, while others believe
that there are better alternatives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is a common belief that all convicts must be sent to jail, while others argue that alternative methods should be of greater effectiveness for them to amend themselves. From my perspectives, I believe in the veracity of the latter opinion.
Those who are in favor of incarceration have a number of reasons to justify their viewpoints. Firstly, restricting one’s liberty can act as a deterrent against all offenders, making them less inclined to commit crimes. As a result, the security of society could be enhanced, citizens are more able to enjoy a serene and safety life. In fact, Hanoi has been recognized as a peaceful metropolis since this city has introduced more stringent laws concerning criminality. Furthermore, imprisonment not only ensures justice will be applied in all aspects of life, but more importantly, consoles the pains of victims knowing that the criminal himself is punished.
Nevertheless, it is my belief that this act is unable to eradicate the root of crimes. Prison time could not rehabilitate criminals, thus only could education and training help them realize their wrongful actions and show determination to change. Prisoners are likely to turn over a new leaf and easier re-integrate into the community thanks to such inspiring and useful lessons. Another important solution should be to supply perpetrators with job opportunities. Given secured jobs with sufficient income, they will never risk their liberty, but try to become ordinary residents. Michigan, which, in light of the policy named “Employment for everyone”, has reduced its crime rates by 10% in 2018, would serve as a salient example.
In conclusion, in my view, all lawbreakers should be given a second chance to correct their faults instead of being forced to spend years behind bars, which could be meaningless.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 664, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that the criminal himself is punished. Nevertheless, it is my belief that this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29109589041 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04908205672 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678082191781 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8328408253 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158042142437 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448909332392 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528925879965 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107809599649 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551866292802 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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