Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Today’s market scenario and interchanging of ideas are not limited to national boundaries, rather diversified; as a result, people have to expose themselves to multilingual environments. Although there are few demerits like social disparity, the merits have outnumbered the negatives, as per my opinion.
Well, earlier our businesses and culture were limited to our own country as we had hardly any means to exchange or expand our business. However, with the development of technology and transportation, people have started expanding their businesses; students have travelled to other countries in seeking better knowledge and education, which lead to cosmopolitan society. For instance, Japan was very conservative few decades ago, but to boost their economy they have to deal with other countries, that forced their workforce to learn English. As they have understand the need of changing their mind-set to cope up the growing competition, they maintain their superiority in the globe.
However, no one can deny the fact that it is extremely easy to exchange ideas in regional languages. A few people, who are unable to learn new foreign language such English, may face many problems in getting high paid jobs, as it demands the knowledge of additional language. Even after having skills to perform, language become barrier for this section of people, and with time, they are neglected by society. However, this can be eliminated from society by providing proper guidance and motivation.
To recapitulate, knowledge of foreign language is the need of the hour, and problem arising due to this can be overcome by proper education, support and motivation. Is it not easy to blame foreign language instead of understanding the need?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
...orkforce to learn English. As they have understand the need of changing their mind-set to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39926739927 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99238031028 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6395431028 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149774391916 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541950499657 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269926002624 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085411485768 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266581677222 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.